Since
I am an advocate of spaceflight, people ask me if One Time on Earth is
autobiographical. The answer to that is no, although like any other writer I have
drawn on what I know. I was left awestruck by Apollo and the notion of mounting
expeditions to the moon, at a very early age I did live in a rundown area of
town and I am inspired by landscape which features in many of the novel’s
passages. There however, similarities between
me and the story’s lead actor cease; whereas I was enthralled by the moon
landings, Henry Lothian, lives and breathes Apollo and thinks of nothing else
but what the day will be like when human beings first steps out on to the
surface of another world. For him this is the most significant day in history
and humankind’s greatest achievement, and in his mind there is nothing more
important than preparing for it so that he will remember every detail until the
day he dies. Henry’s world is changing though. The slums around him are being
cleared and his lifelong friends are under threat of having to move
away. But not everyone agrees with Henry’s views on Apollo. His
bad-tempered father, who struggles to save their pub while houses around
them are reduced to rubble, is convinced that mounting missions to the moon
is not only a waste of money but also a way for Americans
to humiliate the Russians. Conflict between father and son is inevitable and
eventually differences between them become too great, and without giving too
much away, Henry then realises that there is only one way in which he
can truly absorb the event he believes will change the world forever.
In writing One Time on Earth I have
tried to transport the reader back to this unique period in history, a
time when the human race was being drawn to that near mystical point in time
when people left the Earth and journeyed to another place in the Universe. I
have also tried emphasise that the time when we were able to do such things was
a much different time to the one in which we live today.
Excerpt:
It took three days of kicking a ball against walls before I ventured
into Kevin’s old house.
For a while I stood in the front garden and stared at the windows
and the distorted reflections of clouds held within them.
The house was silent, as if it had a peaceful resignation and waited
for its own destruction. I pushed open the unlocked front door and walked in
every room, often standing in the bare spaces with my hands in my back pockets,
astounded at how painstakingly they had cleared their possessions, and how
different the empty house sounded because they had. Knowingly or not, they had
erased all clues about the people who once lived there. I was drawn to the
lounge and I stood in a rectangular patch of colourless light and faced the
tiled fireplace. I hadn’t intended to wallow in self-pity; I had wandered into
the house out of curiosity only, but the moment I came to stand there,
listening to the clicking noises the sunned building made, their voices and the
memories of the things we did swam in my mind. I recalled the brutally cold
night we crowded in that lounge and played Monopoly while Kevin’s mother served
us warm Swiss Roll. I pictured the moment, when, for no reason at all, we were
possessed by the need to collect frogs and pelted down to the walled footpath
by the rec’. Then I recalled up-ending the aluminium bucket over Kevin’s cellar
floor, and with so many frogs springing about, Major not knowing which way to
turn. But most of all I recalled that snowy bonfire night, when we huddled by
the popping and whistling fire, transfixed by the collapsing embers, vowing
that when men walked upon the moon we would be together; and I recalled with
absolute clarity the grim concentration on our faces while we ceremonially cut
our thumbs with bottle glass to fortify this notion in our minds.
My face was wet with tears and my body trembled. I tried to stop
myself and clenched my hands and pummelled my thighs with balled fists, but no
matter how much I tried to distract myself from the memories, I couldn’t stop sobbing
and ran for the door.
Seconds later I was running from the house down the short path into
the street, driving myself faster and faster. At the street end I skidded to a
stop, then as quickly as I had come to a halt, I found himself charging off again.
I wanted to scream and shout, but no words came from me; so I focused all my
energies into pumping my arms and driving my legs as violently as I could.
Adjacent to the track down the side of the row of terraced houses I
came to a halt; heart pounding, chest heaving. I sprinted down the track,
ducking beneath the over-arching privet and came to stand in the space at the
back of the houses. I kicked at dirt and stones and lashed out at invisible
foes, spinning and twirling. I growled and spat; all the ways I could think of
to free my rage.
The garage was no
distance away, so I charged across the gravel, and with fumbling fingers
unfastened the latch. Running backwards, I dragged open the double doors. One
of them caught on stones and fell to the ground, and a low cloud of dust rushed
from beneath it. I didn’t care though. Squeezing down the side of the Vanguard
I tried to yank open the driver’s door, but it wouldn’t budge, then leaning in
through the open window, I pulled on the chrome lever until the door gave in,
groaned and opened partially. I turned sideways and climbed inside. Immediately
I calmed and put my hands through the thin steering wheel spokes. I pressed my
back into the cold leather seat and let my head loll back so that I was staring
at the car’s cloth ceiling. The smell of oil and petrol settled at the back of
my throat, and for a while I sat like this until the knocking of my heart
stopped. When it had, I looked over the dashboard and ran a hand over it, just
feeling the textures beneath my finger. Then I played with the gear lever and
depressed the clutch and listened to the clunking sounds this made. I tried
turning the steering wheel, leaning out of the window to watch the wheel move
from side to side, but the steering was so heavy it seemed to be locked in
place. I looked around for other controls to try out. Set into the dashboard
was a radio. At one end was a cream-coloured knob; so in a vain hope that from
it sounds could be coaxed, I turned it. Nothing happened. At the other end was an
identical knob. I turned this too and watched the crimson line on the tuner
patrol from side to side. Nothing; and it was at this point that I became aware
of a rustling and clanging sound behind me. I stopped what I was doing and
became still, holding my breath. The sound was outside, scraping on the
bodywork. My heart jerked and blood pulsed in my temples. I looked to the rear
view mirror, but saw nothing. I looked down the car to the wing mirror mounted
above the headlamp, and in the cobwebs crisscrossing it, saw a dark and
shuffling figure.
Heart-stopping suspense! I was caught up in the moment, and I cannot wait to read more! Thank you, Neil, for sharing this excerpt from what proves to be an enticing read!
ReplyDeleteThank you and I was pleased to hear that you are tempted to read more.
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ReplyDeleteI remember those beginnings with space travel. I too was and still am a dreamer of traveling in space. I have always wanted to take a trip to another planet. Saturn is my favorite. So your book appeals to me. The excerpt that you have copied here makes me want to read more. I applaud you on the tension that built up to the very last word. Unfortunately, it stopped there!
Your book sounds interesting and I have put it on my reading list.
I wish you all the best.
Ciao,
Patti
Thanks Patti. It's difficult to know how much and what to include in excerpts, but I'm pleased that you found my work interesting and would like to read more. All the best
DeleteWonderful and intriguing read, Neil. Thanks for sharing this exciting excerpt! Much success to you.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments and it's great to hear encouragement.
DeleteNeil, not only do I love this sample, your first sentence pulled me in and kept me there. I always find that the hardest thing to accomplish. I can also picture you clearly, standing in front of your house with your hands in your jeans back pockets. Great job. I wish you great success.
ReplyDeleteBlessings, Pat Yeager, Linkedin
Thanks Pat. Yes first sentences are difficult. I chose a section from a little way into the story where there was an element of drama but didn't give too much away.
DeleteGood stuff for sure...so proud of you Neil...
ReplyDeleteAw thanks, Cheryl. Keep on with the writing
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